Complimenting Poem by Mackenzie Scholte

Complimenting

Rating: 5.0


I lie here,
Cold and shaking
Uncertain,
About what's ahead,
For us
I'm scared of you
Yet I find you...
So intriguing
Your past is a fog,
Your future hazy,
So unlike me
We compliment each other
And it scares me

Tuesday, January 8, 2008
Topic(s) of this poem: fog
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
John Nightingale 19 January 2008

You really allow the reader to feel are part of the poem. True feelings. This is good work.

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