Thursday, July 2, 2009

Confessions At The Battlefield Comments

Rating: 3.8

The question still haunted my heart,
'not whether i would, but for how long? '
I looked into my palm and saw my lifeline crisscrossed with others,
all stained with blood and soil.
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sreedevi sadasivan
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Ted M 06 July 2009

Nice Imagination. Good use of words with a nice flow of thoughts.

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Abby Mackaway 02 July 2009

very good imagery. a worthwhile read. good job. With respect, Abby

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rago rago 02 July 2009

the battlefield is well written and penned so nicely..........

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