Confidence Poem by Sophie Kant

Confidence

Rating: 4.0


My hurt became a star
That shined right above me, around me
An expanding bright sheen that
Enclosed all spaces.

Underneath my feet is an indistinct glass,
non-transparent in its thickness.
Osmosis. The star filters out
Everything except the bad.

My own brightness fills the room.

In everything I shine through.

Thursday, June 26, 2008
Topic(s) of this poem: star
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Greenwolfe 1962 05 July 2008

The creativity of this writing is somewhat stunning. To take something bright and turn it into something dark is quit a reversal. The boldness required to try to alter a symbol, speaks of a kind of brashness. This writer has got to be in rebellion against something. A good writing. But a challenging one. I believe I understood it, but my mind is still stunned. GW62

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