Saturday, January 6, 2007

Confusion In Words Comments

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Poetry in motion, come get lost in this ocean,
Word by word my thoughts form nouns and verbs,
Crashing like waves, forcing my pen to be brave,
Writing from the heart, this jibberish I call art,
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Matthew Brooks
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The poet known as kiibaati 08 January 2007

You wield a gifted pen.

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Patricia Gale 06 January 2007

You have captured the title well, outstanding insight...

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Mary Ali 06 January 2007

It's very good. I loved this line very much 'The clouds are dark, but a light burns forever in my heart', it's very deep.

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