Confusion Vision Poem by Fatima Nusairat

Confusion Vision

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Confusion vision..
The way you write - for example-
Sometimes..
bleeding the ink
On the water page,
And sometimes,
By the pen
Knocking
The roof of the sky
Unite the universe
In your vision!
Because of that..
As the shadow in
The sky..
I come back to you!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Fatima Nusairat 09 May 2013

Oh.., may be the translation here is affecting the meaning of my poem :) , thanx for the comment Guess Who..!

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Guess Who 09 May 2013

Very complicated..... got good expressions here but sorry couldn't understand your special art maybe i got an idea but it surpassed me..... i like your way keep the good work up...... Guess Who

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