Over Time Poem by Fatima Nusairat

Over Time

Rating: 5.0


Over time;
I found the will
in your eyes to live.

If your lips granted
All my cherished wishes,
which flew by the wind

I'll bartered my branches,
for two invisible wings
to flying around you like an angel,

Not to ensure your sleep
But to witness thy awakening.

Monday, November 24, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Michael Walkerjohn 24 November 2014

Aloha Fatima... Thank you for this moment of cherished thought on the subject of dedicated love... so close to the divine... i.e. But, to witness thy awakening... a supreme thought! All of the best from this life, to you, and all of your relations... Michaelw1two.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 24 November 2014

a beautiful poem about many changes in life- you concluding is very powerful and its awakening a voice from the saint Not to ensure your sleep But to witness thy awakening. thank you

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Rajnish Manga 24 November 2014

Thanks for this beautiful poem which strives to redeem a relationship.

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Heather Wilkins 24 November 2014

everything changes in time life moves on nice write

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Gajanan Mishra 24 November 2014

good writing, lovely and beautiful. thanks.

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