Rating: 4.0
Conscience, don't abandon me,
Through my journey, on this day,
Keep supporting, as you're always,
On the wisdom, of my say.

Conscience, don't rely on me,
Because my soul, is not prepared,
On directing, to my people,
On their lives, to be repaired.

Conscience, please forgive me,
To my morning, if you may,
If my eyes, refuse to open,
It's my soul, that's in dismay.

Conscience, please assist me,
In the passage, through this world,
With a cheerful, sense of spirit,
Making life, relish much more.
Monday, May 26, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: analogy
It's a tribute to all Veterans on this day. Zoila T. Flores
Wonderful thoughts, indeed. Conscience is the compass for the life's journey. One may take every step in accordance with the compass and end up in success. Another may take denial steps to end up in devastation. Choice is always within oneself. Real eye opener to every non-conscientious person. Thanks for the gem of a poem. Congrats for being the member's PoD.X
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Kumarmani Mahakul 10 July 2017
Congratulations! Yes, you are right. Conscience never abandons inner strength rather this helps to show light in journey of life. In the passage definitely conscience will assist you. This will give cheerful essence to life. An excellent poem very well crafted is shared here.....10
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Edward Kofi Louis 10 July 2017
Don't abandon me! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
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Seamus O Brian 10 July 2017
A finely crafted piece that hums along in a fine cadence with rhyming that enhances your theme. I enjoy how you disarticulate common expressions to retain a freshness, a series of unexpected linguistic detours whose dysrhythmic jolts contrast superbly with the meter and rhyme to keep the reader engaged. Bravo, and congratulations on POD.
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Tom Allport 10 July 2017
a poem of understanding the need to listen to the inner goodness that resides in all of us sometimes? .........well written.
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Ratnakar Mandlik 10 July 2017
An unique and meaningful soliloquy that is thought provoking too. Heartiest congratulations on it's poem of the Day.
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Richard Wlodarski 10 July 2017
A truly heart-felt and most fitting tribute to all Veterans. If not for them, we wouldn't be here today. Great write! Congratulations on Poem Of The Day. You might enjoy my poem Moral Responsibility. It's appealing to Drake's conscience!
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Rajnish Manga 10 July 2017
The poem is a treat to those who would like to probe life from a philosophical point of view. The equation of conscience, soul and spirit has also been taken into account while talking of life. Thanks.
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Bernard F. Asuncion 10 July 2017
Conscience is a good adviser of the heart and mind in order for life not to go astray....... Rated 10++++ You may visit my HEARTACHES WILL NEVER LAST, BATHE YOUR HEART, and TAKE TIME TO THINK...Thanks, Zoila. By the way, my middle name is also Flores??????
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Michael Walker 10 July 2016
Very well thought out, and conscience is so important in day-to-day life.
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