Saturday, May 3, 2008

'Consciousness Free Be Happy At Last? (Edited) Comments

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Consciousness Free
Not been able to escape
this wet and miserable day,
reading Stephen O’Brien,
...
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Margaret Alice
Fantasy
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Sathyanarayana M V S 05 May 2008

Margaret, You have beautiful language. But I'm sorry to say that the mood in the poem is slipping somewhere in the middle. However, meaningful thoughts and good nice descriptions. with regards, sathya narayana

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Margaret Alice

Margaret Alice

Pretoria - South Africa
Margaret Alice
Margaret Alice
Pretoria - South Africa
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