Thursday, March 14, 2019

Constellation Comments

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You're my star
but you belong in a constellation.
Scratch that.
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Joeremy Ong
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Susan Williams 24 March 2019

I liked this! I liked the change of mind- it made the poem more immediate, more personal, and definitely gave the speaker character and realism! ! ! ! All in a few lines! Fine piece of writing.

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