Cool Breeze Poem by SylvaOnyema (SUPER.T) Ubah

Cool Breeze

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Cool breeze
Blowing left, blowing right
Tossing children
Round, round, roundabout

Cool breeze
Piercing their bodies
Like sweet needles
Clothes fly in the sky
Like kites

The cloud
Turns red
Darkness looms
Like black nights
Heavens open
With the liquid of life

Cool Breeze
Thursday, November 10, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: nature love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Childhood innocence reflected with the coming of the rain.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sylvaonyema Uba 09 April 2018

Cool breeze Piercing their bodies Like sweet needles

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Sylvaonyema Uba 09 April 2018

Cool breeze Piercing their bodies

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Sylvaonyema Uba 10 November 2016

The children play with childhood pleasure and innocence.

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