First Love Poem by SylvaOnyema Uba

First Love

Rating: 5.0


The first time I saw you
I saw love
Your eyes caught my eyes
Like a fisherman
Just caught a big fish

Eyeball to eyeball
We looked closely at each other
With a craving flame
Burning bright like fireworks
Into our naked faces

My heart read your heart
Like metre reading
And I saw
The movement of your love like circuit
Round the circuit vein of my body.

First Love
Saturday, January 21, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: love and friendship
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
The poem reminiscences about falling in love with a sting of nostalgia.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sylvaonyema Uba 21 January 2017

Your eyes caught my eyes. They simply fell in love at first sight.

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Sylvaonyema Uba 09 April 2018

We looked closely at each other With a craving flame

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M Asim Nehal 20 January 2019

Superb love poem, you expressed true feelings. I liked it.10+

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Hebert Logerie Sr. 20 January 2019

This is a wonderful poem. First love can be really painful. Those hot flames burn immensely.

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Edward Kofi Louis 20 January 2019

We looked closely at each other! ! ! Love and art. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Unnikrishnan E S 20 February 2022

Beautiful poem. Love at first sight is a magnificent experience.. Top score

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Sylvaonyema Uba 25 January 2019

Thanks Mohammed for your comment on 'First Love'. I appreciate. Sylva.

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Sylvaonyema Uba 25 January 2019

Thanks Hebert for your comment on 'First Love'. I appreciate. Sylva

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Sylvaonyema Uba 25 January 2019

Thanks Edward for your comment on 'First Love'. I appreciate. Sylva.

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Sylvaonyema Uba 25 January 2019

Thanks Adrian for your comment on 'First Love'. I appreciate. Sylva.

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