Cool Breeze Poem by Pamela Otlowski
Cool Breeze
cool breeze
brings many colored leaves-
harvest moon
Seasonally changing life expectations, metaphorically crafted and poignantly expressed. Thanks for sharing. X
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Beautiful autumn season catches cool breeze on leaves and we feel tender touch. Colourful moon is automatically harvested. Metaphorically beautiful lines you have said. Nice poem! ...10...Welcome to PoemHunter.
I am having trouble figuring out what to do about the user rating At first I thought I was suppose to rate my own poem. Thus the 0. Next decided since we had to vote on our own work a 5 would work best..Then I thought maybe it is the person's reply to my poem that should be rated and in that case your reply 10. And since I have written at least two to you could you (if possible let me know how to edit remarks
Thank you for your comment and welcome. I have always admired this site but did not explore it enough until today to know one can add poems. Your words are even a potential poem- colorful moon and automatic harvest and poem.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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A nice poem. Thank you.
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