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Monday, April 23, 2012

Cool Girls Comments

Rating: ★4.3

Cool Girls

Cool girls standing there
Laughing and twirling your hair
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Ellen Greene

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Calico Jack 23 April 2012

The last three stanzas are just perfect. Great rhythm great rhyme, just plain great! You seem to really switch your tone and rhythm after the first two stanzas which is fine, but you might do well to wright another poem with them and dropp them from this poem, if only to improve the flow.

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