Monday, July 5, 2010

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Hey, sometimes life is okay.
The rhyme and the verse,
A chime and a nurse,
Can keep the bad feelings at bay.
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Percy Flage
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Lucy L 05 July 2010

I love how you have changed the order of the words, makes for an interesting read and I too enjoy playing around with semantics! There should be more of this in poetry I think! Good on you! :)

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