Cosmic Longing Poem by Ronni ManoaHofbauer

Cosmic Longing

Silently, I whisper his name
Into the void where echoes fade,
A dark chasm in my heart's frame,
Where once his presence softly played.

'Where are you? ' I gasp to the night,
As if I'm stardust torn apart,
A million supernovas in flight,
Lost in the cosmos, chart to chart.

A phantom, vast and undefined,
I drift through time's primordial haze,
In seething seas, unconfined,
Adrift in evolution's maze.

'Wake up! ' I cry, as teardrops fall,
Streaming down cheeks of mortal clay,
Fighting fears that would enthrall,
And steal tomorrow's hope away.

I shake off doubts that bind and blind,
These chains of 'what I might become, '
For in this cosmic dance, I find
The strength to beat my freedom's drum.

Friday, February 16, 2024
Topic(s) of this poem: chains
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This poem explores themes of loss, longing, and existential uncertainty, using metaphors of space and primordial seas. The structure is more formal, with a rhyme scheme and consistent meter, which helps to emphasize the rhythm of the emotional journey described. The poem concludes with a note of determination
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