Counting Waves Poem by Trong Phan

Counting Waves

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You don't doubt my words:
The wave which have kissed on our foots exacly was hundredth.
You told me to count them with you
And i count them by my heart.
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But if i am wrong, you don't say anything
Since i yet ready participate in your games meaningless
I fear that a day i'm not like anything
Of counting money only i'm tired!

How many of waves did i count, my love?
I can be wrong again, and i see your smile.

Saturday, October 25, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Trong Phan 29 October 2014

Hi my friends, thank for your visits and comments. I'm happy.

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Roseann Shawiak 28 October 2014

A simple game between two lovers, counting the waves. Beautiful poem, regarding the innocence of young love, and a shy smile. Very pure love is portrayed, it touches the heart with a smiling thought. Thank you for sharing this poem. RoseAnn

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Mantu Mahakul 25 October 2014

Love is with uncountable waves while it proceeds towards God. Beautiful poem composed.

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