Courting Comments

Great love poem. It sounds like the courting ended in marriage.

nice poem, some lines are really beautiful- -Floating oblivious we see, in a sky rising thin and clear, in a sense sublime, that with each light squeeze around your waist, we knew that we were mergin Thanks for sharing.

Very good poem Jim. Your poem speaks of emotions which remain fresh even after half a century has passed. The last line really did the trick. Keep this up.