Saturday, January 18, 2014

Crowd Ed Comments

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Wrapped up tightly in a crowd
Feeling safe and sound
Just one of a thousand more
Alone with others all around
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Dale Totten
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Bri Edwards 06 February 2014

cute, maybe? nice flow with a hint of rhyming. well, more than a hint. i started to wonder if Ed is an alien, or just another human being not showing his inner self when in an anonymous crowd. thanks for sharing. :) bri

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