Crowd Ed Poem by Dale Totten

Crowd Ed



Wrapped up tightly in a crowd
Feeling safe and sound
Just one of a thousand more
Alone with others all around
Camouflaged in flesh and bone
Like everybody there
No one sees the one he is
No one really cares.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 06 February 2014

cute, maybe? nice flow with a hint of rhyming. well, more than a hint. i started to wonder if Ed is an alien, or just another human being not showing his inner self when in an anonymous crowd. thanks for sharing. :) bri

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