Tuesday, September 20, 2011

Crumpled Picture Comments

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I have a crumpled picture
with your tattered little shoes
and I can't help but wonder
just what became of you
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Rachel Grogan
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Vipins Puthooran 31 December 2011

What a fantastic write! Poignant and elegant! ! ! A great poem! ! 10++

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Vipins Puthooran 31 December 2011

What a fantastic write! Poignant and elegant! ! ! A great poem! ! 10++

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Vipins Puthooran 31 December 2011

What a fantastic write! Poignant and elegant! ! ! A great poem! ! 10++

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Naida Nepascua Supnet 21 September 2011

OUCH WHAT A SAD POEM AND YOUR WORDS ARE SO MOVING WE SOMETIMES WONDER WHY LIFE WOULD BE THAT SHORT FOR A LITTLE BOY I LIKE THE LINE ABOUT THE CRUMPLED PICTURE OF HIS LITTLE SHOES I SEE THEM CLEARLY THROUGH YOUR WORDS

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