Cry Poem by Sarah Riley

Cry

Rating: 5.0


I don't know what you've done to me.
I'm falling apart in your arms.
I want to repel you,
As I fall to pieces.
But I won't let you let go of me.
For only you can
Put the pieces
Of my broken heart
Together again.

Until then,
My heart breaks a little more,
With each teardrop.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alex gomez 20 February 2010

it could inprove a we bit

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Dislocated Heart 20 February 2010

Hmm... This is interesting... Since you said you were learning to write.. My advice is to just let it flow.. relax and let it all come to you. doesnt matter what you write.. as long as its from your heart.. :) Keep writing :)

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