Saturday, February 4, 2012

Cry Of A Broken Man.

How strong was the wind that came and blew away my lovers mind?
Oh i bet it was strong enough to make her forget me,
How hypnotizing were the words from his mouth to make her untie the knots that bind?
Am sure they were charming enough for her to forsake me,
What went wrong with the love you had so pure like fountain water?
Oh my darling you broke your promises and me you slaughter.

You vowed to love me till you die,
Oh my sweetheart how come you are still alive?
You left me, but without goodbye,
You took my happiness with you, how am i to survive?
The only thing that made sence to me was you,
Now you are gone and nothing will ever seem true.
Shamba Kaunda
Aqeb Benazir 07 February 2012
This piece has a brilliant flow of rhyme and tone. it's a common topic but takes talent to paint the image you want your readers to receive and that what makes a poem different from the other. very nicely depicted.
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Pheko Motaung 06 February 2012
You do it again! I am lost for words.Amen
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Chisau Kaunda 04 February 2012
Tht's a good 1 son. Keep up the gud work, the Almighty will lead u through.
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