Thursday, May 5, 2016

Crystalline Comments

Rating: 4.3

If I give you this heart
Coated with glimmering crystal,
Will you finally deem it a treasure?
Will you let it stand, on display,
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Katherine Delheart
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Chinedu Dike 07 May 2016

Indeed one's love feeds and gets nourishment from the other. Love is a spiritual experience that affects one profoundly. It's a voyage of pure bliss wherever it is carefully nurtured at all times by both couples. A well articulated piece of poetry, nicely penned with insight. Thanks for sharing Katherine.

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Tom Billsborough 05 May 2016

A heart-rending powerful poem. This is very good writing from the heart. I see it's your first submission. Let's have more. At least I'll start you off with a well deserved 10 Tom Billsborough

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