Saturday, March 25, 2006

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Rating: 3.5

I live in pain, I live in beauty,
In a sea of emotion, by saline water.

I am bonded, I am a puppet
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aniruddha raich
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Sonny Rainshine 25 March 2006

I like the structure of your poem. The series of hyphens that looks on the page like a slit, a cut as you call it, is a nice effect, as well as the word 'cut' on its separate line. The series of hyphens also looks like a piece of string. Good work!

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nagpur, india
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