Cutting Poem by mad burk

Cutting



i never realised what was happening
i never saw the tell tale signs
the thoughts of death welled up inside me
as the blood came pouring down

i lay there in the pool of red
watching it flow freely as a river out of my leg
i never wanted to kill my self
i just wanted the relief it gave
as the pulsing red poured out again

the blade was cool and as sharp as ever
as it sliced me open once again
the adrenaline filled me once more
as the blood went pouring on the floor

they all thought they could help but no one can help me not now not ever becuase once you cross the blood line theres no going back.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nooruddeen Mm 30 June 2009

My Dear Friend A poem should be a source of pleasure or as an ambition, dont show a wrong path to the readers. Your poem, interms of the quolity, it is good and got a nice flow. Best of Luck Regards, nooruddeen

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sky dreams 25 June 2009

this poem gives you chills! good write

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Sayz LFlynn 25 June 2009

quite a touching poem, love the way its writen and the metapher 'as a river' a 10 from me...

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