Saturday, October 8, 2005

Cyberlove Comments

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I've never seen you in 3D
And you've never seen me
So how can it be real
Well, I know how I feel
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Rachel Critchell
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Peter A. Crowther 08 October 2005

Nice neat rhyming scheme with each stanza's last lines rhyming with each other. Very good

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