Jessica J.Hoffman

Dance

I always loved turning.
Because I was good at it.

after a pirouette combination,

Each one feeling encroached
upon by the other.

Deep down I wanted there
to be a way for her to work together

Our young paths were illuminated
by the glints of
sunlight slicing through the window.

This was a kingdom out of past,
lost to time,
and immaculately groomed

my own vision of a dance world
with integrity came into focus.

Poem Submitted: Thursday, October 8, 2009

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  • George Mencken (11/10/2009 10:29:00 AM)

    nice poem.good job
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  • Dierks Emerick (11/4/2009 9:47:00 AM)

    A wonderful write............full of ideas.........

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  • Margaret Donaghy (10/30/2009 2:09:00 PM)

    very creative and imagitive.........
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  • Jimmy Reed (10/18/2009 8:26:00 AM)

    nice poem...keep writing..............

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  • Gwenda Madison (10/9/2009 12:54:00 PM)

    great poem, its well written........9

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