Dance Poem by Jessica J.Hoffman

Dance

Rating: 4.8


I always loved turning.
Because I was good at it.

after a pirouette combination,

Each one feeling encroached
upon by the other.

Deep down I wanted there
to be a way for her to work together

Our young paths were illuminated
by the glints of
sunlight slicing through the window.

This was a kingdom out of past,
lost to time,
and immaculately groomed

my own vision of a dance world
with integrity came into focus.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
George Mencken 10 November 2009

nice poem.good job 10

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Dierks Emerick 04 November 2009

A wonderful write............full of ideas.........

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Margaret Donaghy 30 October 2009

very creative and imagitive......... 10

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Jimmy Reed 18 October 2009

nice poem...keep writing..............

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Gwenda Madison 09 October 2009

great poem, its well written........9

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