Dark Cloud Poem by Valarie Paterson

Dark Cloud

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The dark cloud looms around me
Hiding in the shadows of pain
And blocking the sun
It never strays far

Just when I think it has left
It wraps me in an unforgiving blanket of despare
Whispering in my ear
Playing tricks on my mind

As it tightens it's grip on me
I cry and cry
About all the lies
Hoping someone will hear my plea
But my effort is in vain

Until this pain subsides
And I have found the light
I will continue screaming
For someone to please save me

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ayesha Sartawi 08 October 2008

it is effective, deep and surrounded by sadness its actually unique i liked it good luck keep writing

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