kyle potter


Dark Dark Girl - Poem by kyle potter

Dark girl so filled with strife
Dark Dark girl she'll take your life
Dark girl stay for a while
Dark Dark girl she makes me smile
Dark girl she shows no fear
Dark Dark girl is always near
Dark girl wont see her cry
Dark Dark girl just wants to die

But Dark girl lives in the dark
so you dont see her painfull mark

Dark Dark girl may never know
just how much the light can show


Comments about Dark Dark Girl by kyle potter

  • (4/3/2015 6:22:00 PM)

    I absolutely love the last line (Report)Reply

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  • (4/3/2015 6:21:00 PM)

    i absolutely love the final line (Report)Reply

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  • melanie stinnett (1/12/2015 1:31:00 AM)

    I love this (Report)Reply

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  • (8/28/2013 7:00:00 PM)

    i can definetly relate im like the dark girl but there is no light for me good poem (Report)Reply

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  • Dragon Crenshaw (11/28/2012 2:51:00 PM)

    I CAN SO RELATE TO THIS REALLY GOOD POEM REALLY GOOD (Report)Reply

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  • (11/2/2012 12:19:00 PM)

    I loved this poem. Its one of the ones that is simpal but elagant. (Report)Reply

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  • (10/3/2012 6:35:00 PM)

    I loved this poem. It's one of my favorite poems. (Report)Reply

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  • (9/1/2011 4:27:00 PM)

    It should be LIGHT girl.. negative poems are all over in here - it's good to express your feelings, but isn't it tiring? ..^_^..pfufufu.try to smile and enjoy life once in a while. fighting! (Report)Reply

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  • (6/3/2010 1:48:00 PM)

    One word; well actually I need to write over twenty characters apparently. Now that I've done that, here's the word: AWESOME! (Report)Reply

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  • (4/26/2010 8:33:00 PM)

    thank you, i had a lot of fun writing it about my friend that hated the poem :) (Report)Reply

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  • (4/26/2010 8:01:00 PM)

    its so amazing i luv it (Report)Reply

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  • (12/16/2009 11:55:00 PM)

    I love this, there is so much feeling in it (Report)Reply

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  • (10/23/2009 12:03:00 AM)

    i like it nice work ++10++ (Report)Reply

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  • (10/12/2009 10:56:00 AM)

    A dark poem brought into the light. I enjoyed this poem about the dark dark girl. It was quite clever, witty, and a nice read I might add. Sorrow, Sadness, Hopelessness, Suicide, Death, Happiness, Acceptance, Pain – you encompass this and much more in this short, intense little poem of yours. You’ve done a good job Kyle. Keep up the good work and I look forward to reading more of your work in the future.

    Feel free to read some of my poems:

    http: //www.poemhunter.com/matthew-de-gasperi/
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Poem Submitted: Monday, October 12, 2009



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