Saturday, December 25, 2004

Dark Eyes Comments

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you come to me now and offer to share
you hold out your hand so i'll think you care
you tell me you're sorry and you just didn't know
that i was waiting and that i needed you so
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Cheryl Adair
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William Mae 15 March 2005

Another great poem, payback for pain rendered is not pleasant, and usually not satisfying either. A great poem,

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Herbert Nehrlich1 25 December 2004

Yes, I agree. Punishment (here payback) is best expressed in a poem as real life tends to not look kindly upon it. H

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Cheryl Adair

Cheryl Adair

Hinesville, Georgia
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