Dark Feeling Poem by John Tora

Dark Feeling



The feeling that i have
is the feeling you should know
falling in a dark hole
wishing to see the light
and come out of this hell hole
ending thoughts come and go
seeing dead people is a norm
fighting spirit is almost gone
so i'm standing here all alone
wanting to pray goes through my thoughts
don't know were to start so i leave behind
feeling like god has left me
so i fall deeper in his demise
hanging, cutting, and mutilation he tells me to do
but i know i am better then that
so i act like i aint got a clue
dark power and thoughts lark side by side
if anyone can hear me
help me kill it
so i wont see eye to eye.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I wrote this when i was feeling very Depressed
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Guy Lip-more 15 November 2012

Powerful words, stay strong, like you've said, I'm better than that.

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