Friday, September 6, 2019

Dark Matter Comments

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If each of us is a small planet,
then our beloved ones who passed away is dark matter around us.
I wish to see you again, I know I couldn't see you again.
But your gravitation is still here.
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Min Zhu
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Jazib Kamalvi 13 October 2019

Write comment. Such a nice poem, Min. Read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks

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Dr Antony Theodore 12 September 2019

you are still the reason why my galaxy didn't fall apart, you are still the eternal component of my universe... a fitting memorial song to your boy friend who died. modern poem with a new art of thinking.. thank u. tony

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James Mclain 10 September 2019

An intelligent woman with intelligent insights. Thank you for this write you made us think. James

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Min Zhu 10 September 2019

Thanks Jame, I didn't really write it as I explained in the notes, I actually re-edited it and translated it from an anonymous " poem" in Chinese online.......it made me thinking of beloved ones who just passed away......I found it deep and beautiful

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