Dark Night Poem by breeanna mcelmurry

Dark Night

Rating: 4.5


As i set up in the dark night
all by my self i wonder were u are.
I hear many cars go by but none of them are you.
I call but no answer.
Than i ask god to bring you home.
I just worder if you will ever come home

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Robin Serdynski 21 June 2010

good keep tryin...ok

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Shekhar Joshi 29 May 2009

Hope he/she comes... a good poem...good expression of your inner fear.. a good poem

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Chitra - 22 March 2009

lonely dark times...is something that in every heart rhymes a good write

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Greenwolfe 1962 22 March 2009

Yes. I remember the fear that comes from being alone on a dark night. It used to scare me a lot. GW62

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