Dark Worlds Poem by carli neave

Dark Worlds

Rating: 4.5


A world in darkness
A world in pain
A childhood forgoten
Locked away with the shame
A new life started
But theres nowhere to hide
From the monster thats eating me
On the inside
I crave to remember
My past shaded black
And yet im scared
To let the memories come back

Monday, July 7, 2008
Topic(s) of this poem: childhood,eating
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Greenwolfe 1962 07 July 2008

This is really well done. Very well expressed. I really can't see how it might have been done any better.Excellant. GW62

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Egi David Perdana 07 July 2008

great fallin I love this one, a dark poem, the fallin poem

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