Dark Worlds Poem by carli neave

Dark Worlds

Rating: 4.5


A world in darkness
A world in pain
A childhood forgoten
Locked away with the shame
A new life started
But theres nowhere to hide
From the monster thats eating me
On the inside
I crave to remember
My past shaded black
And yet im scared
To let the memories come back

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Greenwolfe 1962 07 July 2008

This is really well done. Very well expressed. I really can't see how it might have been done any better.Excellant. GW62

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Egi David Perdana 07 July 2008

great fallin I love this one, a dark poem, the fallin poem

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