Darkness Poem by kayla tucker

Darkness

Rating: 4.4


darkness over took me
i acted like a b****
im so sorry i dont know wat came over me
i miss u all the time
HELP ME! ! ! !
im stuck
i cant figure this out
a dark shadow came over me now i remember wat it was
it was darkness
it takes over and controls me i am its puppet
it is the master
i move and speak wat it wants me to
i have no life of my own
i need to get rid of it it stings and burns when it takes over
it hurts bad is there no way out?
can anyone help me?
yes only one person can
that person is me and the one who can help is who i need most my husband
help me i love u so much

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
*I'm not broken. * 18 May 2009

i dont really like this one..its ok but not for me

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Greenwolfe 1962 03 April 2009

Yes, I would say that this is very true. There is a darkness over this writer. I think she does a wonderful job of presenting it objectively. She also knows how to deal with it. I was very impressed by this write. A good bit of maturity here. Bravo! Good title and ending. GW62

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