Monday, September 7, 2020

Darkness Breeds Comments

Rating: 5.0

Wise voices of the old choir are being drowned out
By modern cacophonies. Spiritual drought
Is rife. We pretend that there is no fear and pain,
Yet we're desperately in need of healing rain.
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Dominic Windram 12 September 2020

Thanks Shaun. I'm very happy with this one. I think it sums up my precise feelings about this current age...which always manages to completely baffle me! I shall attempt to surf over all the chaos and concentrate on the finer things in life.

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Shaun Cronick 10 September 2020

Yes, darkness breeds as we delude ourselves as our dwindling spiritual values have set us on the road to perdition. Great poem pulling no punches Dominic, like a true warts and all revelation mantra. A dark full score and deserved too. Thanks for sharing and telling how it is for now until we see sense, then choose to change.

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