Darpan Comments

Hi Renu Deepak Great Poem. Though I have no right to comment but still thought giving feedback from the perspective of a reader may help you. HAR DHADKAN MERI TERE GEET GAAYE Addition of word 'hee' between Tere and Geet will put more stress showing your emotions. HAR DHADKAN MERI TERE Hee GEET GAAYE Poem's title should be close to Light or Roshani rather mirror. Your writing shows that you were going through struggle but now have found the right way which suits you the most. Keep writing. All the best. with best wishes Deepak