Dat Girl Comments

Romantic love is a blend of the mental and the sensual...and that you've beautifully expressed...go get grab her! Good luck...

lucky girl, i might say.: D. it's very often that guys write poems for girls. it's nice. :)

uhhhhhhhh David, is her name Patti or is your middle name Lee or Russell? ? ? ? Had to ask, , , , , if you are you than you know, , , marcia McC. Duggan. If not Hi David Wells and if not you, the one I knew looked like the Yankee Pitcher or so said a Bear as in [Chicago] one night in The Lantern, Lake Forest back in the 80's.

Stellar imagework, and passionful tone...both which highlight this gemstone of work! Solid Crafting, Mr.David Wells(no relation to one of my favorite pitchers, while with the New York Yankees...yes, no?) FjR

i see good work in this poem.