Daybreak Poem by Kevin Eaglesfield

Daybreak

Rating: 4.5


I stand, shoes sodden with the dew
And greet the first faint glow of light.
The sky fills with the spreading hue
Of day replacing night.

Then birds leave roosts and start to sing
To tell the world that it should wake,
And shout their song of early spring
To reinforce daybreak.

Thin mist hangs low from gentle Dawn
And blankets fields and feet of trees.
A favourite time is infant morn
To treasure sights as these.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Original Unknown Girl 28 November 2008

Absolutely beautiful, it made the hairs on my arms stand up! Cannot believe this would not have a 10! ! ! it is perfect. HG: -) xx

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Fay Slimm 25 September 2008

Just beautiful Kevin - written from a tender heart, and with good rhyming, the descriptive phrases are well thought out. A ten. for this too from Fay.

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