Monday, December 7, 2015

Daybreak Comments

Rating: 5.0

One time I stood in a valley,
Hemmed in by its walls of stone;
The day was fair on the uplands,
But still in my little zone
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Mary T Lathrap
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M Asim Nehal 07 December 2015

Great imagery in your poem with a philosophical undertone and satire....I liked it 10++

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Mary T Lathrap

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