Daydreaming Poem by Ivan Ng1
Daydreaming
Rough grass poking on my legs...
Prickly on my arms, too.
The sun slowly starts baking.
Swoosh!
Trees sway.
Breathing quietly, I feel alive.
A blinding blanket,
glowing ever brightly,
forces me to squint.
'It'd be so nice to sleep here.'
Heaven vanishes as I awake.
This gave me a relaxed feeling. WONDERFUL POEM!
I felt so serene while reading this poem, you're a great poet. The last line was perfectly said, and how you called it as 'heaven'-vanishes as I awake-bringing us to reality again.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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5/5/2024 8:26:34 AM # 1.0.0.1119
I like the way this poem has a relaxing theme. Something like mine called 'Sunlight's World'. Adeline