Promise Poem by Ivan Ng1
Promise
Ceiling so high
Walls so wide apart
Treading along this path
with a gasping heart
Led by Trust
I follow through
dim-lit hallways
after you
Words exchanged
I'm left alone
To face my fears
away from home
Darkness falls
too strong to bear
My gasping heart
leaks out a tear
Moments pass
I wait for you
Into your arms
So strong and true
A kiss exchanged
A promise made
That I'll stay strong;
not be afraid
Clock ticks past
the number two
Tearfully glad
as I hear you!
youre very good with your rhyme and rhythym...excellent indeed...wistful sweet and a hide and seek with hope and despair.
This one's probably my favorite of all your poems.Great imagery, we can really feel the emotions w/ your explicit descriptions.Keep writing, good luck.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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5/5/2024 12:23:36 PM # 1.0.0.1119
intensely penned....great work...