Creak Poem by Ivan Ng1
Creak
Sleep now, child
Today's adventures
wore this little warrior down
Barney's song
goes through his mind
The boy's as happy as can be
No worries trouble
his cute little head
as he lies awake in bed
Creak!
This single sound
is enough to put
the boy on his feet
'Mommy's back! '
He shouts aloud
Half awake, half asleep.
wonderful ivan! ! Keep more of them coming and plz do give me a feed back on mine as well. rdgs
As small and meaningless something may seem, it always has a deeper meaning to someone. Great work.
A nice poem Ivan, simple and cute but I think Creak is not the appropriate word for a child's sound, it carries awful meaning as well. There must be some other appropriate word for this.In Urdu we call it '' Ghun Ghun '. Anyway, it's poetry and a poet's excellence is to use words in his own way. Thanks for your message. Regards.
This is so cute! Very touching. God Bless, gave you a ten! Linda
how simply adorable...such sweet simplicity and what a sweet topic.
I'm writing about myself, actually. But I aim to connect readers with my experiences. Thank you for the kind comments!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Mommy's working, duh.