Dead Poem by berna rose dublin

Dead

Rating: 4.5


unexpressive eyes,
bloodshot and boring.
a pale face always frowning.
cold hands,
undesirable to touch.
thin body,
longed for a hug.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Greenwolfe 1962 20 July 2008

I'm going to assume that the writer is writing about someone who is actually living physically. It is a perfect description. But I see no reason to write about that. So given my assumption, I gave this a 9. If this is a description of the dead, then I change it to a 7. GW62

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