Friday, August 8, 2008

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Through the haze of the Milky-Way's
And fields showering stone
In the night sky many things lie
But to me only two are well known
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Viola Grey 09 August 2008

I quite like the clever use of rhyme in this...and definately thought the subject was thought provoking...a really good piece with great emotions...nice work.

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