Tuesday, May 15, 2018

Dear Brain Comments

Rating: 5.0

O Brain O brain, for umpteen days you have slept in vain;
Losing with time, the gleam of way you once used to reign.

At times though cold, you were the ruler strong & bold;
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Anupama Dutt
COMMENTS
vijaya 15 May 2018

Excellent poem with emotional touch

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Sachin 15 May 2018

This one is a completely unknown side of you. Very well written. All the Best

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Shyamala 15 May 2018

Good one Can see the attention paid for rhyming and meaning.. keep it up.

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Anu Dutt 15 May 2018

Glad you liked it, , .thanks Shyam!

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Sheeja 15 May 2018

Good job Anu...very thoughtful

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Anu Dutt 15 May 2018

Thanks Sheej. Have to put the Brain to use once in a while ;)

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Madhav 15 May 2018

A rare combo of techie, fashionista and a poet. Good going Anu

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Bernard F. Asuncion 15 May 2018

Dear Anupama, such a great poem....10++++

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Anu Dutt 15 May 2018

Thank you very much. It's my first attempt and very encouraging to hear that you found it good.

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