Dear Mother Comments

A beautiful and compassionate piece of poetry written from the heart. Lovely and very passionate. Thanks for sharing, Garba.

Nicely done. Thanks for sharing such a lovely work.10

Dear my dear great mother, yesterday when i and darkness were together; generous moon was riding the beautiful sky further, with million friendly and happy stars or billion rather, and, on the face of the moon lit was smile and wonder, wav'd at me with no harm or danger, then slowly and quickly i remember, you have been dancing in my mind, like a branch of tree dancing the rhythm of wind, October, November to December and January to June, what a long journey and what a heavy burden? Through the forest across the ocean up the hill and down, to valley then been taking under your wing, oh! My dear mother i owe you forever, and to owe me is never, dear mother the great solar system, you are revolved by the planets, with money and action the repayment so stronger, your reward is there in the golden garden, by the grace of the greatest and the best power. Wow- - - What a magnificent write ! !