Congratulation for your 'Epical Novel'.
Your linguistic and literary skill beyond dispute;
You too write extremely good hand.
Yet to tell the truth, beg a pardon,
In your Novel have done a mistake,
In a word a great blunder.
The word ‘world' is wrongly used.
Rather can be said causeless, misuse...
In a sentence of time the word, ‘world' is not inevitable
You can easily drop it.
There would be no change of meaning.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.I would like to translate this poem