Gold Star - 41,288 Points (29/03/1959 / KOLKATA)


They are in the sky, the sky shelter of the stars
Stand down trees, trees, soil protection
Trees, birds, trees, birds, harbor
Fish swim in the water,
Water shelters fish
The river flows down the sea,
The sea, river's, harbor
At the end of the road, home,
Home shelters the passer-by
Chignon anxiety-complex, in the heart shelter concerns
Flambeau of fire,
Conational conflagration content of my heart

I have no refuge anywhere....

Stretching hands standing at the door hypnotic death
Bucolic enthralling
Comedy color black
Says whispering, 'I lull; I aliquot; alleviated alley; buddy not bubble
Though bramble but leafy greenish croton. '

Your asylum your asylum ...

Topic(s) of this poem: narrative

Form: Free Verse

Poet's Notes about The Poem

This poem is a candle of psychologically depressed person.

Comments about Asylum by SRIRANJI ARATISANKAR

  • Mehta Hasmukh AmathalalMehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/31/2016 6:53:00 AM)

    Nice one... asylum...10


    You wish to be free again
    With pain
    And work for country
    You left already

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  • Puspanjali SahuPuspanjali Sahu (5/26/2016 2:31:00 AM)

    Heart touching..Thank you (Report)Reply

    Sriranji AratisankarSriranji Aratisankar(6/11/2016 6:48:00 AM)

    Thank you dear poet. I expect more you on my pages.

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  • Tom Billsborough (5/23/2016 9:31:00 AM)

    There are so many protective layers and yet the depression burns from within.
    You are very imaginative, Sriranji. It is a most intriguing poem.
    Tom Billsborough

    Sriranji AratisankarSriranji Aratisankar(6/11/2016 6:51:00 AM)

    Thank you my dear poet. I always expect inspiration from you.

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  • Edward Kofi LouisEdward Kofi Louis (5/17/2016 6:18:00 AM)

    Life is like that at times! As we now see refugees heading towards Europe. Thanks for sharing. (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, May 12, 2016

Poem Edited: Thursday, May 12, 2016

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